Wednesday, 6 August 2014
Day 2 - Dear Carmel - I remember the dog...
Well here is day 2. I have been eagerly awaiting to get back to the desk and begin my second writing exercise, or should I say my Memory Journal. It's true walking the dog in the morning refreshes the creative juices, my mind talks to me a million miles an hour. I wish my brain had a built in Dictaphone, recording all the thoughts, the lines, the words I come up with; the dog must think I mad talking to myself.
Dear Carmel
I remember the dog, I remember his first day. There standing with chest pushed out and a look of mischief slightly hidden beneath his apprehension, was a dog who finally had a home. I don't know how long he'd been lost, a while I reckon by the look of his wiry ginger coat, the thinned-out hair almost completely missing - a lack of nutrition I presume.
The dog home named him Banjo, it's not a name I would have chosen, but don't get me wrong I like it and think it suits him. The funny thing is when he first arrived home, he didn't know his name, I tried calling him every dog name I could think of, names I thought someone else would have chosen, like Jack, Scruff, Ginger, Jackson, Joe, but none of them worked, he didn't respond to any of them.
Banjo's a jumper, he's a dog springboard, bouncing from a standstill he can make it over any fence. I have to tie him on a chain, I don't like doing it, but if I don't I risk this stupid mutt getting away, and I couldn't bare the thought of Banjo becoming lost again.
I try walking him with a lead, he pulls like a tractor, the strength is phenomenal, wrenching my shoulder socket with every attempt to chase anything that moves. Actually, he'd be better suited as a sleigh dog the way he digs those hinds in, wrestling with me to pull ahead, to take me on a run I don't think I'd be capable of keeping up with.
There's no mistake he's a street dog as he stands in the teaming rain while his dry, warm kennel remains unoccupied. He doesn't like his kennel and it appears from the torn pieces of hessian hanging from the metal frame, that he doesn't like his hammock bed either. I can't have him go cold, he must miss his creature comforts like a soft padded dog bed. I buy a padded bed big enough to squeeze into his kennel, encouraging him to keep warm. The next morning he is sitting in the middle of the yard, he looks pleased with himself, he looks at me as if to say, don't bother I don't want it. The soft padded bed is now nothing but the remains of shredded foam and stuffing littering his yard, soft white tufts surrounding him like snow.
I've replaced his lead with a harness, it stops him choking as he pulls me along if nothing else. He lives in a yard now, fenced just high enough to keep him from bounding over, his attempts to escape when he see's the cat made fruitless. He knows his name now, 'Banjo,' I call with every annoying bark he lets out when he see's a rogue kangaroo cross the yard, or another dog being walked by their owner out on the street. I love this dog, I wish he could tell me his story, his street story like street people get to do in 'The Big Issue.' I want to understand this complicated companion of mine, if only I could speak dog.
Tuesday, 5 August 2014
Day 1 - Dear Carmel - I remember the boat...
Follow my entries - 'Writing the story of your life' - Entry One
Dear Carmel,I remember the boat, the one that saves lives. It hangs from the side of the Rhapsody the welcoming cruise ship I spent ten awesome days soaking enough summer sun to fill me with a lifetime of vitamin D. The boat is actually a life-raft, but to me it looks more like a boat. Who would've ever imagined such a lifesaving vessel could act as boat, a boat that took us on a wider journey across the seas of the Caribbean to what otherwise would remain isolated. The Island is filled with atmosphere, presence, culture of men and women and their children, their adorable coils of tight knit hair, their skin the colour of chocolate you could easily eat, enjoying them, swallowing their bright smiles, taking it all away with you never to forget.
The pristine waters are like no other, they are clear and I mean clear like a well chlorinated swimming pool. The sands are crystal, glimmering in the days warmth as though littered with tiny speckles of diamonds. The sand leads you to the waters edge that is filled with the wonderful joy of passengers who have embarked, like me, onto an island filled with the slim outline of palm trees dotted amongst the hilly backdrop, a backdrop that I imagine conceals a world of habitual huts for its people far behind in a distance you cannot see. The sands invite you deep into the warmth of the water, carrying you out as far as you would like to go, sharing the freedom offered with an occasional tortoise who slowly swims past his audience, his inquisitive nature a sight to be mustered.
On shore there is an exuberance of colourful materials of t-shirt's and sarong's flapping happily in the soft breeze I am grateful for drying the beads of sweat that have drenched my body.
In the distance the Rhapsody sits awaiting our return. As one life-raft disappears behind the curves of the islands shores, another re-appears with the next load of expectant customers awaiting their anticipated arrival. The boats sway across the soft ripples of the glassy water, mesmerising those who take the time to watch there delicate movement, and who would've ever thought?
(Exercise 1 - 'I remember the boat).
Writing the Story of Your Life
As a member of Writers Victoria, I am always lucky to get the very latest news of any up-coming courses and competitions that may stir my creative juices in writing. My latest ambition is to nail 'Writing the story of my life,' and it just so happens to be the title of Carmel Bird's ultimate guide to writing memoir successfully.
I have always had a preference to write non-fiction, usually in the form of opinion pieces or essay. So when I tell you Carmel's book is no coincidence sitting within my bookshelf, otherwise gathering dust,when I recognise her name as one of the inspiring mentors listed in Writers Victoria's workshops being offered for season two, you will understand the elation I felt when I finally made a conscious decision to embark on a new adventure of writing, the adventure of writing my memoir.
As you would imagine I have taken my copy of Carmel's book out from the chaotic filled shelves lining my office wall so that it is given new life; new life to a memoir; my memoir.
So over the next however long it will take me (notice the non-commitment to time) I will endeavour to complete the exercise's Carmel sets out throughout her book in order to help build my confidence in telling my story, the narrative of my life.
I'm going to use this blog as my forum to address these exercises, firstly topics 'For the memory journal.' The backbone to memoir writing. One topic a day, and there are 60 topics, so this will take a few months to complete. I invite you to read my writing, this is an exercise that encourages writing freely; perhaps you might want to join me, or just read my narrative, perhaps you might like comment (constructively of course).
My entries will be listed as "Dear Carmel,' as though I'm writing to her, telling her my story; it all makes sense - doesn't it? Here goes, ENJOY my venture, as I hope I will. Day one starts today!
I have always had a preference to write non-fiction, usually in the form of opinion pieces or essay. So when I tell you Carmel's book is no coincidence sitting within my bookshelf, otherwise gathering dust,when I recognise her name as one of the inspiring mentors listed in Writers Victoria's workshops being offered for season two, you will understand the elation I felt when I finally made a conscious decision to embark on a new adventure of writing, the adventure of writing my memoir.
As you would imagine I have taken my copy of Carmel's book out from the chaotic filled shelves lining my office wall so that it is given new life; new life to a memoir; my memoir.
So over the next however long it will take me (notice the non-commitment to time) I will endeavour to complete the exercise's Carmel sets out throughout her book in order to help build my confidence in telling my story, the narrative of my life.
I'm going to use this blog as my forum to address these exercises, firstly topics 'For the memory journal.' The backbone to memoir writing. One topic a day, and there are 60 topics, so this will take a few months to complete. I invite you to read my writing, this is an exercise that encourages writing freely; perhaps you might want to join me, or just read my narrative, perhaps you might like comment (constructively of course).
My entries will be listed as "Dear Carmel,' as though I'm writing to her, telling her my story; it all makes sense - doesn't it? Here goes, ENJOY my venture, as I hope I will. Day one starts today!
Friday, 4 April 2014
Writer-in -residence
writer-in-residence
noun
noun: writer-in-residence; plural noun: writers-in-residence
- 1.a writer holding a temporary residential post in an academic establishment, in order to share their professional insights.
Just blogging this as I was a bit confused with what a writer-in-residence's role actually was.
Is the writer-in-residence the writer or the mentor?
I was under the assumption a writer-in-residence was someone who spent time at some luxury hide-away working on their own latest novel or sought after biography or anything that what would amount to a new publishable piece.
What I've learned is that a writer-in-residence possibly shares their views, thoughts and experience for another writer, providing their perspective on writing at such venues as Literary Festivals, where they obtain selected pieces from other writer's work and offer editing and sharpening of plot and structure.
I still remain a bit confused with the whole writer-in-residence thing; I still have alot to learn.
Monday, 9 September 2013
Shortlisted
Well, I finally feel my writing has made some impact recently with my non-fiction story "Coming Home" being shortlisted for the 2013 Trudy Graham - Julie Lewis Award for Prose.
While my story failed to make the winning post, I'm so happy that it at least made the grade for consideration.
Another milestone to put under my writer's hat; and encouragement to keep on writing.
Well done to all the winners.
While my story failed to make the winning post, I'm so happy that it at least made the grade for consideration.
Another milestone to put under my writer's hat; and encouragement to keep on writing.
Well done to all the winners.
Wednesday, 21 August 2013
Great tips & advice - The Humble Hyphen
As writers we're always looking for advice right? The Australian writers centre – is great resource for keeping in touch with what courses are available to help with your writing skills, along with heaps of writing tips and advice.
The latest tip offered was about the humble hyphen and how it can play a crucial role in your
writing, if you understand how to use it properly. The problem is many writers don’t know
how to use them, so here are a few tips offered by the writer's centre to help you on your way.
You use a hyphen when two or more words are joined to form an adjective that appears before a noun or pronoun. For example:
She has a three-year-old son.
This is a well-written book.
If the adjective comes after the noun or pronoun it’s describing, you don’t use the hyphen. So:
Her son is three years old.
This book is well written.
You also use a hyphen if you’re adding a prefix to another word, such as re-enrol, neo-Gothic or ex-girlfriend.
Some style guides suggest a restrained approach to the hyphen and would encourage leaving it out if you’re confident that it won't confuse your reader.
Saturday, 6 July 2013
Procrastinating!
As a writer I've found the biggest time waster to be procrastination. I search the web endlessly to find writers tips on Point of view, beginnings, endings and everything in between. I'm hooked on writing memoir; creative non-fiction and articles but seem relentless in looking for just one more vital piece of information before I make a start. I have an abundance of an ever increasing volume of data on how-to's that I really should be an expert on my chosen genre's but non-the-less, here I am re-thinking, delving deep into the world of overload, and to get started on actually writing something of substance still sits idle. How many books,excerpts and articles must I read before I think I am ready to put my words out there for all to read?No more researching; I am going to forge ahead with my inner voice and put together a piece of a life time...no pun intended. I have stories to tell; some funny, some sad, some different, some that will serve as healing, some just because. I'm on my way! Thank you blog for giving me the strength and courage to write and think more clearly.
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